Plot
-Start the story with a crisis.
This serves two purposes. One, you hook the reader immediately from the first
sentence, and two, it lets you start the story at a later plot point, and
include what would have been the beginning events as back story. For instance,
in my Victorian novella THE DISCIPLINARIAN (Secrets, Volume 15, Red Sage
Publishing) my opening line is, “Clarissa, I’m sending you to The
Disciplinarian.” Oooh. Can’t you
almost hear the scary music playing in the background? What had Clarissa done
to make her husband turn her over to such a nefarious-sounding person? How
would poor Clarissa react to the news? While her husband is dragging Clarissa
to The Disciplinarian’s waiting coach, that’s the time for you as an author to
give the reader a little information on what brought these characters to this
apparently dire state of affairs.
- Keep your characters, locations, and plot to a minimum. Remember, a novella is a simple story, simply told. In my novella THE BET (Secrets, Volume 27, Red Sage Publishing) the entire story takes place over one weekend at a Victorian country house. Besides the hero and heroine, I’ve included only one other character -- the heroine’s brother, who is the antagonist and the catalyst for the story. He sets the entire tale in motion when he manipulates the hero into an outrageous wager. THE BET has one setting, one major conflict, two main characters, and one antagonist. The perfect recipe for a novella.
- Include an absolute minimum of back story. Tell your readers only what they need to know to make them understand your characters’ motivations. For example, in THE DISCIPLINARIAN, my hero Jared, the shadowy legend of the title, has never failed to turn a difficult wife into a dutiful spouse -- but not in the way their husbands expect. Years ago, Jared’s sister had been beaten to death by her spouse, so Jared now feels an obligation to help other women avoid the same fate. Clarissa, in this story, is that woman. So you see how I’ve used a tiny bit of back story to explain Jared’s altruistic motivation. That’s all you need.
- Keep your characters, locations, and plot to a minimum. Remember, a novella is a simple story, simply told. In my novella THE BET (Secrets, Volume 27, Red Sage Publishing) the entire story takes place over one weekend at a Victorian country house. Besides the hero and heroine, I’ve included only one other character -- the heroine’s brother, who is the antagonist and the catalyst for the story. He sets the entire tale in motion when he manipulates the hero into an outrageous wager. THE BET has one setting, one major conflict, two main characters, and one antagonist. The perfect recipe for a novella.
- Include an absolute minimum of back story. Tell your readers only what they need to know to make them understand your characters’ motivations. For example, in THE DISCIPLINARIAN, my hero Jared, the shadowy legend of the title, has never failed to turn a difficult wife into a dutiful spouse -- but not in the way their husbands expect. Years ago, Jared’s sister had been beaten to death by her spouse, so Jared now feels an obligation to help other women avoid the same fate. Clarissa, in this story, is that woman. So you see how I’ve used a tiny bit of back story to explain Jared’s altruistic motivation. That’s all you need.
-Make every scene count. Every
word of a novella should move the story forward, and even better, as an author
you should try to end every scene with a hook, a crisis, or a disaster. Action
is key. Danger is even better. You don’t want a reader to be able to put your
story down!
- No subplots. Remember, in short
fiction you’re limited by word count, so keep the focus on your big crisis.
Conflict
Conflict
is the soul of any story. The plot is your framework, but conflict is the magic
that keeps a reader turning the pages. Conflict has two main components:
internal and external, and both these components need to escalate quickly
throughout a novella, building to a crisis at the Black Moment. In erotic
novellas like the ones I write, the all-important sexual tension plays a big
part.
Every
romance, whether sweet or sexy, is ultimately about getting the hero and
heroine to the ‘happily ever after’ or the ‘happy for now.’ In a novella, the
best way to do that is to quickly throw your hero and heroine into an
impossible situation (plot), and then keep them constantly in each other’s
company while the sparks fly (conflict).
Here’s
an example of external and internal conflict in my Roman novella CONQUEROR
VANQUISHED:
In 52 B.C., Rome has just conquered Gaul…
Leonidas Danae Vorenus, commander of Rome’s prestigious Sixth legion, is ordered to establish a strategic outpost in Gaul after its surrender to Julius Caesar. But on the way to his new post, Leonidas is seriously wounded in an ambush. Only one person can save his life, and she’s his sworn enemy.
Solange is a
healer. While she values every life, she’s loath to save one of the hated
Romans who’ve just conquered her land. But under threat by Leonidas’ second-in-command,
Valerian, that ‘if Leonidas dies, you die,’
she has no choice but to treat the injured commander.
However, the relationship between conqueror and conquered soon evolves into much more. Solange and Leo’s forced intimacy ignites an unexpected attraction, and prompts the two enemies to look beyond the reason for their hatred to explore the equally powerful emotion simmering underneath.
Leonidas Danae Vorenus, commander of Rome’s prestigious Sixth legion, is ordered to establish a strategic outpost in Gaul after its surrender to Julius Caesar. But on the way to his new post, Leonidas is seriously wounded in an ambush. Only one person can save his life, and she’s his sworn enemy.
However, the relationship between conqueror and conquered soon evolves into much more. Solange and Leo’s forced intimacy ignites an unexpected attraction, and prompts the two enemies to look beyond the reason for their hatred to explore the equally powerful emotion simmering underneath.
What
about you? Ever written a novella? Was it harder or easier for you than a
full-length novel?